created LIT7895NzenuLaAmlak - #2076
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According to our discussion here: BetaMasaheft/Documentation#3383, I created LIT ID for this prayer. I was too quick to create an ID for the second prayer, so I am deleteing it |
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| <title xml:lang="gez" xml:id="t1">ንዜኑ፡ ለአምላክነ፡ ኂሩት፡ ትሕትና፡ ወየውሐት፡</title> | ||
| <title xml:lang="gez" type="normalized" corresp="#t1">Nǝzenu la-ʿAmlākna ḫirut |
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We should prefer ʿAmlākǝna, no?
| tǝḥǝtnā wa-yawǝḥat</title> | ||
| <title xml:lang="en" corresp="#t1">Let us proclaim the kindness, humility, and | ||
| gentleness for our God</title> | ||
| <title xml:lang="en" xml:id="t2">Let us proclaim the kindness, humility, and |
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We do not need t2 here. It is the same as t1 translated.
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You need to decide on the most correct version of the title and translate it approprietly.
| <p>A prayer praising humility and kindness of <persName ref="PRS5684JesusCh">Jesus | ||
| Christ</persName> and asking for His protection. This prayer is not of a | ||
| magic nature itself, but might be used in protective scrolls, too, along with | ||
| <term key="Asmat">His sacred names</term>.</p> |
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Sacred names for Jesus?
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We capitalize "his" here but I think it sounds better with "Jesus' sacred names"
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| <title xml:lang="gez" xml:id="t1">ንዜኑ፡ ለአምላክነ፡ ኂሩት፡ ትሕትና፡ ወየውሐት፡</title> | ||
| <title xml:lang="gez" type="normalized" corresp="#t1">Nǝzenu la-ʿAmlākna ḫirut | ||
| tǝḥǝtnā wa-yawǝḥat</title> |
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| <title xml:lang="gez" xml:id="t1">ንዜኑ፡ ለአምላክነ፡ ኂሩት፡ ትሕትና፡ ወየውሐት፡</title> |
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Standardise to ወየውሀት፡
| <p>A prayer praising humility and kindness of <persName ref="PRS5684JesusCh">Jesus | ||
| Christ</persName> and asking for His protection. This prayer is not of a | ||
| magic nature itself, but might be used in protective scrolls, too, along with | ||
| <term key="Asmat">His sacred names</term>.</p> |
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Sacred names for Jesus?
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| <div type="edition"> | ||
| <note>The following incipit is taken from the <ref type="mss" |
| <relation name="ecrm:P129_is_about" active="LIT1878Marbab" passive="PRS5684JesusCh"/> | ||
| </listRelation> | ||
| <div type="edition"> | ||
| <note>The following incipit is taken from the <ref type="mss" corresp="CBD936">Ms. |
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| <title xml:lang="gez" xml:id="t1">ንዜኑ፡ ለአምላክነ፡ ኂሩት፡ ትሕትና፡ ወየውሐት፡</title> | ||
| <title xml:lang="gez" type="normalized" corresp="#t1">Nǝzenu la-ʿAmlākna ḫirut |
| tǝḥǝtnā wa-yawǝḥat</title> | ||
| <title xml:lang="en" corresp="#t1">Let us proclaim the kindness, humility, and | ||
| gentleness for our God</title> | ||
| <title xml:lang="en" xml:id="t2">Let us proclaim the kindness, humility, and |
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You need to decide on the most correct version of the title and translate it approprietly.
| <p>A prayer praising humility and kindness of <persName ref="PRS5684JesusCh">Jesus | ||
| Christ</persName> and asking for His protection. This prayer is not of a | ||
| magic nature itself, but might be used in protective scrolls, too, along with | ||
| <term key="Asmat">His sacred names</term>.</p> |
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We capitalize "his" here but I think it sounds better with "Jesus' sacred names"
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| <title xml:lang="gez" xml:id="t1">ንዜኑ፡ ለአምላክነ፡ ኂሩት፡ ትሕትና፡ ወየውሐት፡</title> |
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is it ለአምላክነ፡ or ዘአምላክነ , as you have below? The translation below depend on that.
I think ዘአምላክነ is correct since ለ would require poss pronouns on the nouns.
The nouns should actually be in the accusative anyway.
| <p>A prayer praising humility and kindness of <persName ref="PRS5684JesusCh">Jesus | ||
| Christ</persName> and asking for His protection. This prayer is not of a | ||
| magic nature itself, but might be used in protective scrolls, too, along with | ||
| <term key="Asmat">Jesus' sacred names</term>.</p> |
| <note>The following incipit is taken from <ref type="mss" corresp="CBD936">Ms. | ||
| CBD937</ref>.</note> | ||
| <ab>በስሙ፡ <gap reason="ellipsis"/> ንዜኑ፡ ዘአምላክነ፡ ኂሩት፡ ትኅትና፡ ወየውኀት፡ ዘእንበላ፡ ዓቅም፡ ዘሰቀሎ፡ | ||
| ለሰማይ፡ ከመ፡ ቀመር፡ ጺበ፡ ዕፅ፡ ተስቅለ፡ ዘከለሎ፡ ለሰማይ፡ <gap reason="ellipsis"/> |
| </listRelation> | ||
| <div type="edition"> | ||
| <note>The following incipit is taken from the <ref type="mss" corresp="CBD936">Ms. | ||
| <note>The following incipit is taken from <ref type="mss" corresp="CBD936">Ms. |
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The ID of this manuscript is CBD936, but the name is Dublin, Chester Beatty Library Dublin, CBD W 936, therefore the ref should be:
<ref type="mss" corresp="CBD936">Ms. Dublin, Chester Beatty Library Dublin, CBD W 936</ref>
Personally, I would put 'manuscript' not into the link, but place it outside:
The following incipit is taken from the manuscript <ref type="mss" corresp="CBD936">Dublin, Chester Beatty Library Dublin, CBD W 936</ref>
You can shorten phrase by closing the tag. In this case, the name of the manuscript will be inserted automatically:
The following incipit is taken from the manuscript <ref type="mss" corresp="CBD936"/>
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